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Post by Valora on Jan 28, 2024 3:30:05 GMT -5
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Post by Vox Falconis on Jan 28, 2024 7:52:50 GMT -5
I liked this new format and it had a great length to read. Not too long, not too short. Having an all-female office cast is a very nice change, though I think Vicky errr Victoria and Jessica are talking a bit too much however they already have a good chemistry.
The show itself was good and it's nice to see not so many people from upper card here which brings the focus on mid-card and lower card (which doesn't exist in my opinion, because they're just too good for that), really.
However, I see some inconsistencies, sadly mainly about Abbigail Dresden and her parentage. For example, there's the scene between Abbi and Valora and she just calls Valora "Mom" casually on-air? That's a huge thing for the audience and no one bats an eye bout this? Bit disappointed here. (My RP with Abbi talking about this possibility was rather unluckily timed as Valora's RP with the revelation has chronologically happened after this, but was written before.) At least, the final Warzone before the season finale will be all about this.
I like how new possibilities have opened with Savior Hawkins against DemoniK.
The match with Dynast Era and Lana Hill with her bodyguards was... kind of weird for me. I can't put my finger on it, but this story doesn't really work out for me.
Blaise surprised us with a huge announcement about Riot's match at Urban Warfare. That could be very interesting however I personally had put this announcement in WarZone, not in Vanguard, as this announcement was done by Blaise and relates to a matter in a higher-up card, keeps me asking why then we have Jane Coughlin if the CWF boss is doing everything by himself anyway? Especially he's the one who introduced Vanguard already in the beginning. Too much Blaise time if you're asking me.
Starting the Vanguard with a single main-event star was a nice angle, worked really nice for me.
In the end, Vanguard started well and promising, but there's still some work to do. We have a new exciting diamond we can shape to a perfect one. Now I'm hooked for the second-last War-Zone!
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Post by Eddie Williams on Jan 29, 2024 11:05:52 GMT -5
I can say I enjoyed the show. The format seemed to work well.
I really enjoyed the Riot and McClancy segment with the announcement for the Srar Chamber match.
I enjoyed most of the matches. The ending of my match stood out to me. Though out Eddie's career. He has only lost 4 times via Submission before this match. So that was a nice surprise rather than the standard pinfall. Gives me stuff I can work with.
Overall really enjoyed the show.
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