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Post by andisnow on Jun 20, 2023 15:44:58 GMT -5
I would love some feedback to see if this landed the way I intended. First rp in like 2 years!
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Post by robriot on Jun 20, 2023 17:51:00 GMT -5
I thought it was really original. I've never seen that approach before, with your character seen through the eyes of someone else. Originality is a rare thing in efedding so that's a strong positive. It could have used a little more match relevance, but I appreciate that coming in cold after two years away isn't easy. You'll warm up. The quality of writing is there and I'm intrigued by the perspective you've developed.
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Post by blaisemcclancy on Jun 20, 2023 19:27:45 GMT -5
While I'll agree with what Riot said... I'll post a more indepth review for you after the results are posted, as I don't like to do them till then.
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Post by andisnow on Jun 22, 2023 18:37:00 GMT -5
While I'll agree with what Riot said... I'll post a more indepth review for you after the results are posted, as I don't like to do them till then. I’m looking forward to it!
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Post by andisnow on Jun 22, 2023 18:38:04 GMT -5
I thought it was really original. I've never seen that approach before, with your character seen through the eyes of someone else. Originality is a rare thing in efedding so that's a strong positive. It could have used a little more match relevance, but I appreciate that coming in cold after two years away isn't easy. You'll warm up. The quality of writing is there and I'm intrigued by the perspective you've developed. Thank you! It was a fun concept and I agree I could have used more relevance. But yeah, like you said, I’ll warm up again soon enough.
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Post by Vox Falconis on Jun 26, 2023 11:40:05 GMT -5
I'm sorry for the language, but I fucking loved it! It's very creative to tell the character from this perspective. The intriguing build-up hooked me immediately with the mysterious neighbor who's apparently absolutely nuts. Instead, it's just... the new CWF member Andi Snow!
I really liked how some average guy is evolving into a big fan of Snow, just all from the "me"-perspective.
The description, the setting, the speeches, and especially the selling of both characters... the whole thing just felt about right. Like from a good book. It's, without a doubt, one of the best RPs for this show.
So, please continue that because I really wanna more!
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Post by blaisemcclancy on Jun 27, 2023 19:36:17 GMT -5
Okay, show's up. And while not sure you've read it yet. I'll give you some feed back.
It was a great rp.
A gamble to do it from a 3rd party perspective that we don't really know. But one that paid off.
What I wish you had done was a 2nd rp tbh.
With the one rp, you made it very hard to judge. Once you've confirmed that you've read the results, if you want a more in depth, just let me know if you want it in public or private.
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Post by andisnow on Jul 1, 2023 19:26:34 GMT -5
I'm sorry for the language, but I fucking loved it! It's very creative to tell the character from this perspective. The intriguing build-up hooked me immediately with the mysterious neighbor who's apparently absolutely nuts. Instead, it's just... the new CWF member Andi Snow! I really liked how some average guy is evolving into a big fan of Snow, just all from the "me"-perspective. The description, the setting, the speeches, and especially the selling of both characters... the whole thing just felt about right. Like from a good book. It's, without a doubt, one of the best RPs for this show. So, please continue that because I really wanna more! Thank you so much for this feedback! It makes me so happy to know that the concept seems to have landed exactly as I intended. Originally I was just going to do this as a one off, but I think I also want to develop this into a full fledged storyline so your encouragement means a lot!
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Post by andisnow on Jul 1, 2023 19:27:54 GMT -5
Okay, show's up. And while not sure you've read it yet. I'll give you some feed back. It was a great rp. A gamble to do it from a 3rd party perspective that we don't really know. But one that paid off. What I wish you had done was a 2nd rp tbh. With the one rp, you made it very hard to judge. Once you've confirmed that you've read the results, if you want a more in depth, just let me know if you want it in public or private. Thank you for the feedback! I actually didn’t realize that my opponent had already done two rps prior to me posting my first, so I totally understand the decision that was made. Now I know for next time!
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